The twenty-fourth chapter of the "She Died With Two Subscribers" series
I love that you pull us right into all the conflicting emotions Will is going through. I felt every awkward moment of that confrontation. So good!
@Deborah Witte Thank you for such a positive review, and thanks for reading!
Oh no. My imagination is running wild with all kinds of scenarios, mainly, sinister thoughts.
Well, that was awkward! Our Will has an uphill battle to win Nadine back.
Oh... poor Will. Bad luck seems.to.be following him around.
That damned Dane really created a mess. I like that Will was willing to shift on his crazy belief about gifts. I have hope for these two but it sure doesn't look good right now. I hope there is some expose of Dane coming in the future.
@Jane Hiatt I have only written ahead one chapter, so I am going to give your vote for a chapter on Dane serious consideration!
Thank you. Can’t really have a bully ruining lives without a come uppance.
Damn you Dane!
Great build up and yet all new tension to keep us reading on Douglas! I wanted to stop Will and tell him to write her a letter!! :)
@sallyjupe Thanks! Like you, I am still a fan of writing an old fashioned letter by hand and locating a stamp and sending it off at the post office!
That Dane has damned Will!
Oh wow, Will....
I love that you pull us right into all the conflicting emotions Will is going through. I felt every awkward moment of that confrontation. So good!
@Deborah Witte Thank you for such a positive review, and thanks for reading!
Oh no. My imagination is running wild with all kinds of scenarios, mainly, sinister thoughts.
Well, that was awkward! Our Will has an uphill battle to win Nadine back.
Oh... poor Will. Bad luck seems.to.be following him around.
That damned Dane really created a mess. I like that Will was willing to shift on his crazy belief about gifts. I have hope for these two but it sure doesn't look good right now. I hope there is some expose of Dane coming in the future.
@Jane Hiatt I have only written ahead one chapter, so I am going to give your vote for a chapter on Dane serious consideration!
Thank you. Can’t really have a bully ruining lives without a come uppance.
Damn you Dane!
Great build up and yet all new tension to keep us reading on Douglas! I wanted to stop Will and tell him to write her a letter!! :)
@sallyjupe Thanks! Like you, I am still a fan of writing an old fashioned letter by hand and locating a stamp and sending it off at the post office!
That Dane has damned Will!
Oh wow, Will....