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Elliott H. Robbins's avatar

Exceptional short story. Superbly written. So good, that I found myself speed-reading near the end to find out what happened, and then going back over the passages that were read too quickly to suck out every drop of marrow. Halpert is a master of his craft and his gift needs to be shared with anyone and everyone still interested in reading thoughtful and hopeful short stories.

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Douglas Halpert's avatar

I am so sorry for your loss @roseenglund I am glad that I offered you some inspiration with my story. Stories come when they are ready. In the event that it helps you, I'll share a bit here about part of my writing process.

I keep my writer's notebook close at hand and when I feel a particular emotion and connect it to an observation about someone or something that I think is interesting, I record it. When I sit down to write, I look over my list of fragments and often one of them jumps out at me as a story idea or inspiration for an opening line. I then research information about the topic before I set sail on drafting. I am sending a supportive breeze your way from Ohio as you set sail on your writing journey...

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